Seemed like it could be good at the start.
Your lyrics were alright but seemed a little samey after awhile. I would have expected you to add more variety to the characters racing in the song given the song you are parodying is only really funny because it makes so many references. Basically you seemed to reference Donkey Kong a tad too much.
Also your singing was emotionless and dragged down my overall enjoyment of the flash. Probably should have gotten somebody else to sing.
I agree with you on the singing. Unfortunately, I don't know any good singers.
Meme Warning!
Probably one of the lesser known memes out there but I like it.
Definitely one of the better Camel Day flashes that's for sure.
Just fix Wade's dress. It flickers to a blue colour at one point annoyingly.
Thanks. ;)
Should be fixed now.
I'm not really a fan of experimental flash.
-It was alright but some things looked like they could have used a bit more polish. Normally I wouldn't mind this but on this occasion it was more noticeable since you reused the same graphic many times in some parts (Such as the buildings at the start).
-All the flashy patterns in the background were pretty well done. Not enough to distract your attention from the strange things happening in the foreground but enough so that you can actually notice them.
-I noticed the last part was reminiscent of your usual style. I enjoyed that more than the rest of the flash probably because of the bit of humor which lifted the mood.
Though like I said before, I'm not into these seemingly random 'experimental' flashes but for those who are it seems like it could be fun so I'll add it to the experimental collection.
Thanks for the support and you're not the only one who didn't like the buildings. :P
Well, it was a first. We'll see what I can conjur up in the future.
Move along, nothing to see here...
The flash is simply a picture of the LazyTown gang with some graffiti on Robbie Rotten with the bake a cake song sped up and in another language playing.
Sure the song is kind of catchy but the author hasn't made it himself and there is no animation whatsoever.
If you wanted to improve it you could, uh, animate the cock shaking around or something...
Yes, yes it is.
Too early for a remake.
The story was really nothing new. Sticks fighting sprites has been done and random fighting to the death is really old now.
-I gotta say I actually preferred the paint brush style of the stick from the first flash better than the line tool style this flash adopted. You clearly have improved your animation from the last flash but paintbrush makes things look so much more natural. But don't get me wrong, it's a good thing to be trying out different styles.
-You gotta make a proper background. A single line doesn't quite cut it lol. You would've been better having no background in this case.
-The text wasn't timed well. I had trouble reading all the text at times.
-Looking at the positives I suppose the music was chosen well for the action at hand.
The animation has improved but I think it was a little too early to be remaking this flash. Though I'm not entirely sure it was entitled to a revamp at any time anyway.
Hopefully your next flash will be a more original entertaining story. Good luck :)
1. Eh..i dunno. The line style made it a much cleaner style, but yeah i think i see what you mean.
2. Yes...but the file size, its not the file size...its getting the bg on there. Ifd io needed it moved, sometimes it would really slow down.
3. Yeah, that was a problem i had found too many times. the movie was meant to be revamped for 24fps, but due to animational flaws, i had to cut it to 12 fps, meaning te text would be there longer. i had decided this too late...
4. yea, it was kinda hard fiundoing the JUST RIGHT music...
5. stories never get old...but i suppose its timwe to move on >_<
6. hope fully i come up with a better 2nd one....
"Worth watching"
It was pretty random but at the same time enjoyable and the length of it just made it funnier. It's a good flash rendition of a "really long story for something little" scenario which most of us have come across before in real life.
-The graphics were pretty good. The crappy black and white parts with little animation really seemed to work for this flash for some reason.
-Voices were a good quality. The alien's babbling was a nice touch too.
-The only thing that really annoyed me/ruined the flash was the ending. I really don't find that sort of thing funny (and not because it's offensive or anything but just because it's stupid and a lot of people end their flashes like that).
Had I made this flash I probably would've ended it with a loop, like the alien stabs his arm for taking so long to tell the story then the guy leaves and a new person asks him how his arm got cut. Just an idea.
All up the flash was funny enough and well enough animated to be worth watching.
Good Idea
It was alright but not great.
Most of it was just yoshi running into stuff then blood (or a red blob) appearing or yoshi would explode. And when yoshi wasn't being killed it was just random. (What was the whole smiley face thing with the coins about?)
Sorry but I just couldn't find those things funny. I've seen the same type of humor in a lot of other flashes so that could be why.
I think the main problem with this flash is the menu. Having to press play inbetween each scene really slows down the action and I think something like this flash needs to happen really quick like level 11. Like BAM! *yoshi dead* BOOM! *yoshi dead* SPLAT! *yoshi dead*
The other problem is the amount of unnecessary buttons and the switch between credits and movie. (I got stuck there until I went back to read your comments which I admit I should've done in the first place). If you just put the credits in line after the last sketch it would be so much simpler.
Animation and sound/music were acceptable. Nothing WOW but enough to get the jokes across.
All in all some people new to sprites might like it but it was just alright and not great.
1st Paragraph: I agree, it's pretty monotonous, but I hardly ever do this sort of humor.
2nd: That's exactly why I made this. This sort of humor seems to be relatively popular with several groups of people, and I hadn't ever really made something like this, so, I decided to try.
3rd: I agree, but otherwise, sound sync is messed up. I've had the problem before, and my solution of choice is to code every single sound in.
4th: Yes, you always should read my comments. The way this flash is built doesn't really allow that, but I sorta like having it loop.
Clock day submission
It's a clock day submission. A B here a few clocks there and a seizure-riffic background and you're done.
As far as clock day submissions go this one is very average. Nothing special at all.
1/10
(and yes I only reviewed this because you had no reviews here)
Yup. That just about sxplains clock day submissions from anyone outside of the Clock crew. Next year i'll try to make a better flash. This was done on Clock day just for the hell of it.
Thanks for reviewing (my other comment was deleted due to do a person who doesn't know how to review. ) Because without this one and the one above my flash page would be dull.
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Australia, Vic
Joined on 1/15/05
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